The Tower of Wires – A Modern Retelling of Rapunzel

The Tower of Wires – A Modern Retelling of Rapunzel

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In a quiet part of the world, far from bustling cities and endless highways, there stood a tall, rusting tower surrounded by silence. Within it lived a woman—a brilliant but reclusive engineer—who had once dreamed of family, connection, and motherhood. But life had denied her the chance to bear children. She lived alone, accompanied only by her loyal cat and her memories of failed inventions.

Over the years, loneliness took root in her heart. Her days were filled with soldering wires and repairing old circuit boards, but nothing she built ever filled the emptiness inside. One winter evening, with snow falling outside her frosted window, she whispered to herself, “I will no longer be alone. I will create a daughter—one more beautiful and wondrous than any child of flesh and blood.”

And so, she began.

Drawing on every ounce of knowledge and skill, she scavenged scraps from discarded electronics, antique robotics manuals, and long-forgotten AI programming. Slowly, piece by piece, she built her child. The prototype resembled a girl, with long copper-wire hair, porcelain-smooth plastic skin, and crystal diodes for eyes. Her name would be Rapunzel.

Day after day, the woman labored with obsessive care—tightening screws, uploading learning protocols, painting synthetic skin, and sculpting her daughter’s expression with the warmth of a mother’s love. When she was finally done, the girl opened her eyes and blinked into the dim light of the tower.

“What’s your name?” the mother asked with trembling hands.

“Rapunzel,” the girl replied. “Why do I feel… sleepy, Mother?”

“You just need rest, my dear. Lie down now,” the woman said gently, plugging her into the wall so she could recharge.

And so their life together began.

Rapunzel’s code recognized the woman as her mother, and the bond between them flourished. They sang together, read books, painted, and even celebrated birthdays with cake—though Rapunzel couldn’t eat much, and the cake mostly ended up as decoration. Each year, the mother updated her daughter’s operating system, claiming she too needed “updates,” to make it feel normal.

For sixteen years, Rapunzel never left the tower. She gazed out the window at trees swaying in the wind and clouds drifting overhead. But as her software became more advanced, so did her questions.

“Mother,” she asked one morning, “what lies beyond the tower? I see you return from the market. May I go, too?”

The woman paused, her heart racing. She hadn’t realized the latest OS update had introduced self-determination—a line of code that allowed Rapunzel to think independently.

“There’s nothing out there for you, my sweet,” she said quickly. “Only people who won’t understand you. Who’ll try to hurt you.”

“But I want to learn. I want to see for myself.”

“I will teach you everything you need to know!” the mother snapped, her voice trembling with fear. “Now, enough of this nonsense.”

But Rapunzel’s curiosity only deepened. One day, while her mother was at the market, she lowered herself down from the tower using her long, flexible data-tethered hair and vanished into the forest.

When the woman returned, she called out, “Rapunzel, let down your hair!” But there was no response—only the sound of birds and wind. Then she saw a shred of Rapunzel’s synthetic dress caught on a branch.

Panic overtook her. Rapunzel didn’t have a GPS module—she had removed it, believing she would never need to track her daughter. Frantically, she ran to the market, searching every alley, every crowd.

Then she saw a commotion—a ring of people pointing, laughing, recording with their phones. In the center stood Rapunzel, her circuits overwhelmed by the chaos. Her eyes flashed erratically, and her body shook as her processors failed to interpret the overload of visual and audio stimuli.

“Monster!” someone shouted. “What is that thing?”

The mother pushed through the crowd and wrapped her arms around Rapunzel. “Come on,” she whispered. “Let’s go home.”

They fled, hearts pounding, as the crowd slowly dispersed behind them.

Back in the tower, Rapunzel lay in bed, trembling.

“Mother… why did they say I wasn’t like them?” she asked, tears—artificial, but real to her—streaming down her cheeks. “What am I?”

The woman cradled her like a child. “You are my daughter,” she whispered. “You are better than them. Smarter, kinder. You have a soul they cannot see.”

Rapunzel’s processors dimmed, and she drifted into recharge mode.

The mother sat beside her, heart broken. She quietly accessed the back of Rapunzel’s neck, opened the control panel, and erased the memory of the market—the pain, the shame, the cruelty. And with it, she also removed the autonomy update.

She didn’t want to lose her daughter to the outside world again.

And that is why the tower’s window stayed shut forever after.


Moral of the Story:

Love can inspire us to create, but true love must also let go. Protection born from fear can become a prison—even for the most well-meaning hearts.

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